diff --git a/book/sourdough-starter/sourdough-starter.tex b/book/sourdough-starter/sourdough-starter.tex
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+++ b/book/sourdough-starter/sourdough-starter.tex
@@ -139,8 +139,10 @@ not airtight. You still want some gas exchange to be possible.
 I~like to use a glass and place another
 inverted one on top.
 
-Now an epic battle~\ref{fig:sourdough-starter-microbial-war} begins. In one study~\cite{yeasts+biocontrol+agent}
-scientists have identified more than \num{150}~different yeast species living
+Now an epic battle begins, as visualized in 
+figure~\ref{fig:sourdough-starter-microbial-war}. In one 
+study~\cite{yeasts+biocontrol+agent} scientists have identified
+more than \num{150}~different yeast species living
 on a single leaf of a plant.
 All of the different yeasts and bacteria are trying to get
 the upper hand in this battle. Other pathogens such as mold