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If there is the one food Germany is known for, then it is probably bread. If there is one food Germany is known for, it is probably bread.
There are thousands of different varieties of bread in Germany. There are thousands of varieties in Germany,
Making bread has been an integral part of our culture. and making it has been an integral part of our culture.
My bread journey began already a earlier in my childhood. My mother being parent My bread journey began during childhood. My mother, being a parent
of 3 would always use saturdays to bake a delicious loaf of bread for the family. of 3, would always use Saturdays to bake a delicious loaf for the family.
It was a white fluffy sandwich bread made within 1-2 hours using yeast. It was a white fluffy sandwich bread, and she made it within one to two hours using store-bought yeast.
Being a bit more experienced now I know that it's Being a bit more experienced, I now realize it's
ideal to wait a bit before cutting slices of your bread. But back then ideal to wait a little while before cutting into your bread, but back then,
we kids couldn't help it. Mom had to directly cut us a few slices. We would then we kids couldn't wait. Mom would cut for us a few slices straight from the oven, and we would
directly proceed and pour butter or jam on each slice. Within a few minutes 1kg of immediately proceed to pour butter or jam on each slice. Within minutes, 1kg of
flour has been consumed. Bread became an integral part of my weekly food. flour would be consumed. Bread became an integral part of my weekly food.
I was lucky that my parents were able to afford a yearly skiing trip to I was lucky that my parents could afford a yearly ski trip to
Alto Adige in northern Italy. In the small town called Valdaora we Alto Adige in northern Italy. In the small town called Valdaora, we
would try new restaurants every year, but ultimately always end up in our favorite would try new restaurants every year, yet always end up in our favorite
pizza place. The pizzas we had were incredibly delicious. The dough pizza place. The pizzas there were incredible. The dough
alone was so tasty that we ordered blank pizzas with purely the dough and a alone was so tasty that we would order just the bread with a
bit of olive oil and salt. bit of olive oil and salt.
Of course my question was always, mom - can we make this at home too please?
So over the years as we became friends with the owners we would receive Of course, my question would always be, ``Mom, can we make this at home, too, please?''
So over the years, we became friends with the owners and would receive
more and more clues as how to make the perfect pizza dough. There more and more clues as how to make the perfect pizza dough. There
are no secret ingredients inside. It's just flour, water, salt and a bit of yeast. are no secret ingredients inside. It's just flour, water, salt, and a bit of yeast.
How can such a simple combination of ingredients create such an incredibly delicious How can such a simple combination of ingredients create such an incredibly delicious
pizza dough? My parents being persons of habit would return every year with us. pizza dough? My parents, being creatures of habit, would return every year with us,
Each year my interest grew. At home mom and me would try to replicate and every year, my interest would grow. At home, Mom and I attempted to replicate
the recipe. We tried baking on a stone, a steel, adding oil to the dough, the recipe. We tried baking on a stone and on a steel. We tried adding oil to the dough and herbs
adding herbs to the pizza sauce. We ended up in a never ending cycle to the pizza sauce. We fell into an endless cycle of experiments. However, we never managed
of experiments. However, we never managed to get close to the experience to get close to the experience we had while on vacation.
that we had on vacation.
A few years later I began my studies in the small German city Göttingen. Some years passed, and I eventually began my studies in the small German city of Göttingen.
For the first time I was faced with shopping for my own bread. It was never For the first time, I was faced with shopping for my own bread. It was never
on my mind to actually start baking my own bread. I would just buy me on my mind to actually start baking it for myself. I would just buy
a good loaf of bread while shopping in the supermarket. My favorite variety a good loaf while shopping at the supermarket. My favorite variety
used to be a Schwarzbrot, Korn an Korn. It's a very dark hearty rye bread, was a Schwarzbrot, Korn an Korn. It's a very dark and hearty rye bread,
consisting of lot of rye berries and sunflower seeds. Being a little naive consisting of many rye berries and sunflower seeds. Being a little naive,
I never before looked at the packaging of what I was actually buying. That I'd never before examined the packaging of what I was buying. One day, that
changed one day. I looked at the packaging and was shocked. The seemingly changed.
healthy bread consisted of all sorts of things other than flour and water.
I looked at the label and was shocked. The seemingly
healthy bread consisted of so many other things aside from flour and water.
The black color was not coming from the flour, but from caramelized sugar. The black color was not coming from the flour, but from caramelized sugar.
The packaging stated it was a sourdough bread. Why was there additional yeast The packaging stated it was a sourdough bread, but then why was there additional yeast?
added to the process though? I thought sourdough doesn't require additional I thought that if it was really sourdough, it shouldn't require additional yeast, and I
yeast? I realized that something is utterly wrong with the bread I was buying. soon realized that something was wrong with the bread I was buying.
Quickly I proceeded to check all the other supermarket breads, only to I proceeded to check the other supermarket breads, only to discover that they, too,
notice that all of them contained ingredients I never heard of. I lost trust contained ingredients I'd never heard of. That was the day I lost trust
in all supermarket bread. in supermarket bread.
At home I decided to read on how to make bread. Much to my surprise I learned At home, I decided to research the proper way to make bread, and much to my surprise,
that the recipe for making a pizza and bread are quite similar. Some recipes I learned that the recipes for making pizza and bread were actually quite similar, yet
would call for fresh yeast, others would call for dry yeast. Deep diving there were also diffferences. For example, some recipes would call for fresh yeast, while
into some forums I read lengthy discussions and was even more confused. others would call for dry. Deep diving into various online forums and all their many
I tried to use different flours from different brands, organic flours, discussions, I became even more confused.
non organic flours. I realized I know nothing about making bread. Recipes
would very often confuse me, because they contradicted each other. The recipes
were just a collection of seemingly random steps to follow. The baking instructions
and temperatures were all different too.
Having completed my studies I started to work as an engineer. I tried using different flours and different brands, all in both organic and non-organic varieties.
When working as an engineer you are faced with challenges. The compiler or runtime I realized then that I knew nothing about making bread. Recipes would often contradict each other,
always screams at you with errors you have to fix. Sometimes it can take hours or leaving me further confused. They seemed like little more than a collection of apparently random
even days to fix a simple problem. If you want to become a software engineer steps to follow. The baking instructions and temperatures were all different, too.
you have to develop a certain never giving up mindset. Frequently when writing code,
a set of pre-made routines is used by developers. These routines have been Meanwhile, having completed my studies, I started work as an engineer.
programmed before by other engineers and can then be used to ship code faster. We engineers are faced with many challenges. The compiler or runtime is
The pre-written code is commonly known as {\it a framework}. In many cases always screaming at you with errors, and it's your job to figure out how to fix them.
these frameworks are not built by a single person. The source code is published It can take hours, sometimes days just to fix a simple problem. If you want
and other engineers from all around the world can help improving and changing to become a software engineer, you have to develop a certain ``never-give-up'' attitude.
the source code. Frameworks have made many successful businesses possible. Working
with frameworks in most cases they do exactly what they say they do. However Frequently when writing code, a set of pre-made routines are required. These routines have been
written by other engineers and can then be used to ship code faster.
This pre-written code is commonly known as {\it a framework}. In many cases,
these frameworks are not built by a single person but by engineers from all around the world,
each of whom can help by improving and changing the source code. Frameworks have made many successful
businesses possible.
In most cases, frameworks do exactly what they claim they do. However,
sometimes you are faced with issues you don't understand. In 99.95 percent sometimes you are faced with issues you don't understand. In 99.95 percent
of all bugs in software, the developer writing the code is probably the issue. of all software bugs, the developer is the issue. Sometimes, however, the framework has a
Sometimes though the framework has a bug. This is when you have to dig deeper and bug. That is when the developer must dig deeper to see the what and the why behind what the
see what and why the framework is doing something. You will need to read other framework is doing. You will need to read other engineer's source code, and you will be forced
engineer's source code. You are forced to understand why things are happening. to understand {\it why} things are happening.
Being not happy with what I was baking, my engineering mindset took over. I had Being unhappy with what I was baking, my engineering mindset took over and I had
to deep dive and understand exactly what happened. Much to my surprise none to do my own deep dive to understand what was going on. Much to my surprise, however,
of the recipes I could find would tell me why I should use exactly amount X none of the recipes I'd encountered would tell me {\it why} I should use amount X
of water for flour Y. Why exactly should I use fresh yeast over dry yeast? of water and amount Y of flour, or {\it why} exactly I should use fresh yeast over dry yeast. Why
Why should I slap my dough while kneading on the counter? Why is a standmixer should I slap my dough while kneading it on the counter? Why is a standmixer
better than kneading by hand? Why should I let the dough sit for this long? better than kneading by hand? Why should I let the dough sit for this long?
Why is steaming the dough during baking important? Do I really need to Why is steaming the dough during baking important? Do I really need to
get myself an expensive dutch oven to bake bread? This became even worse get myself an expensive dutch oven to bake bread?
when I started to read about sourdough. It sounded like dark magic to me.
Some sourdoughs were made from fruits, other from flour? Why do some
people have a wheat, a rye and a spelt sourdough? How often should the sourdough be
fed? All my questions back then could probably fill 20 pages. I was confused
but became more and more determined to find out how decent bread at home
should be made.
The feedback from my friends had improved and improved with each The problem compounded when I started reading about sourdough. It all sounded like black
iteration of homemade bread. Compared to coding where magic. Why were some sourdoughs made from fruits, while others were made from flour?
you sometimes have to wait for months to receive feedback on what you do, Why should one recipe use wheat while another used rye or spelt? How often should the
bread making is much more direct. Plus you can eat your successes and failures. sourdough be fed? The questions I had then could have filled 20 pages. I was confused,
Much to my surprise even my failures would start to taste but became even more determined to learn how decent bread at home should be made.
better than most of the store-bought breads. Eating a homemade bread that
took you hours to make allows you to develop a different relationship
with your food. Making a bread from scratch with my bare hands
was a much welcome change after hours of working on the computer.
I would keep learning more about the process of fermentation and
various techniques of bread making. I approached the topic of sourdough bread
in a very similar way how I approach software.
After several years of learning and documenting my progress I decided it was The feedback I received from friends helped me to improve with each
time to share my ideas with the world. When working on open source projects iteration of homemade bread. Compared to coding, where you sometimes have to wait months
it is important to see a history on how the code changes over time. This for this feedback, bread making is much more direct. Plus, you can eat your successes
way you can jump back to previous versions of the source code. This was (and failures!) And, much to my surprise, even those failures started tasting better than
the perfect tool for documenting my recipes, because my recipes would also change most store-bought breads. Eating a homemade bread that took you hours to make allows you
with each subsequent iteration. Much to my surprise my open source sourdough to develop a different relationship with your food, and baking bread from scratch with my
work had been appreciated by many other engineers. The project became bare hands was a welcome change after hours of working on the computer.
very popular on the website GitHub, originally built to share software
source code. When baking great bread you also need to learn certain techniques. I continued learning about the process of fermentation and various techniques of bread making.
I figured it was easier to share these techniques as a video. That's how I approached the topic of sourdough in a manner similar to software, and after years of
my YouTube channel was created. I chose the name {\it The Bread Code} to researching and documenting my progress, I decided it was time to share that progress with the
visualize my software engineering approach to bread. The channel only gained world.
viewers when I started to choose more engaging thumbnails and titles for
the videos that I made. 3 years later I now reserve 2 days per week When working on open source projects, it is important to see their history and how the source
to follow my bread baking passion. 3 days per week are used for my engineering code changes over time. This way, you can easily jump back to previous versions. This was
job where I still write code on a daily basis. My bread days continue the perfect tool for documenting my recipes, because they, too, would change with each
to fill me with a lot of joy and passion. To me there is nothing better than subsequent iteration. Much to my surprise, my open source work on sourdough was appreciated
seeing how people make amazing bread thanks to my tips and explanations. by other engineers, and the project became popular on the website GitHub, originally built to
The community has grown and grown, providing many interesting discussions share open source software.
and ideas surrounding the topic of bread making. There is always something
new to learn and I feel that even now I am just barely scratching the surface with Now, when baking great bread, you also need to learn certain techniques. I figured it would be
what I know and teach. Would you ever have imagined that fruit flies are like easier to share these techniques in video form. Thus, my YouTube channel was born. I chose
bees and are part of the wild yeast's success story? I made a video where the name {\it The Bread Code} to capture my engineering-oriented approach to bread. It took some
time to get right, but after choosing more engaging thumbnails and titles for
the videos I made, the channel started gaining viewers.
Now, three years later, I dedicate two days each week to follow my bread baking passion, while
the other three days I continue to work as a software engineer, writing code on a day-to-day
basis.
My bread days fill me with both joy and passion. To me, there is nothing better than seeing
how many people have made amazing bread thanks to my tips and explanations. The community has
continued to grow, spawning many interesting discussions and ideas surrounding the topic of
bread making. There is always something new to learn, and I feel that even now I am just barely
scratching the surface with what I know and teach. Would you ever have imagined that fruit
flies are like bees and are part of the wild yeast's success story? I made a video where
I tried to cultivate wild yeast spores coming from fruit flies in order I tried to cultivate wild yeast spores coming from fruit flies in order
to bake a bread. It worked, the bread turned out amazing and even tasted to bake bread. It worked; the bread turned out amazing and even tasted good! These kinds of
very good. These kind of experiments spark my natural interest. Conducting them experiments spark my natural interest. Conducting them and seeing how other people share in my
and seeing how other people share my interest makes me very happy. interest makes me incredibly happy.
The problem with running a YouTube channel is that all the information The problem with running a YouTube channel is that all the information
you see is filtered and provided to you through an algorithm. I am very you see is filtered and then provided to you through an algorithm. I am concerned
worried how algorithms are shaping modern information. They tend to with how algorithms are shaping modern information, because they tend to
put users into certain categories where you only see news related put users into certain categories where they will then only see news related to
to the bucket that you have been placed in. A key metric is how many those same fixed categories. A key metric determining visibility of your channel is how many
people click on a video after it has been shown. The content you create people have clicked on a video after it's been shown, and the content you create
is not even shown to every subscriber of your channel. If the algorithm is not even shown to every subscriber of your channel. If the algorithm determines the video
determines the video is not engaging enough, your content starts to is not engaging enough, your content starts to decay in YouTube's nirvana. Even if your video
decay in YouTube's nirvana. If your video goes viral, the algorithm goes viral, the algorithm will stop showing it once engagement rates with new users goes down,
will stop showing it once engagement rates with new users go down. and older videos fade over time as the decay punishment factor increases. I know, because
Older videos are slowly fading over time, as the decay punishment I have developed similar algorithms myself as a software engineer.
factor increases and increases. I have been developing similar algorithms
myself as a software engineer.
I decided I want to try taking some time off from the algorithm cycle and I've since decided to take some time off from the algorithm cycle to work on something more
work on something more long term, something even more meaningful. long term and meaningful. My mission has always been to share my knowledge with as many people
My mission has always been to share my knowledge with as many people in the world as possible. That's also why my content has been provided in English rather than
on the world as possible. That's also why my content has been provided German. After discussing with members of the community, I figured that writing a book could
in English and not in German. After discussing with members of the community help me achieve that goal. Most of the books that exist today are collections of recipes. My
I figured that writing a book could help me to achieve that goal. Most idea, however, is to provide you with a deeper foundation of knowledge that you can use to
current books are collections of recipes. My idea was to provide you follow other recipes.
with a deeper solid knowledge foundation that you can use to follow other recipes.
In software terms a {\it bread framework}. This book could help everyone
facing issues with flour, fermentation, baking and much more. It would provide
a detailed understanding on why certain steps should be done and how to
adapt when things go south while making bread. However
I want my knowledge to be accessible by everyone around the world. I do
not want to charge for the book. I want the information to be freely accessible,
no matter your budget. That's why I decided to make the book open source
and ask the community to support funding my project via my ko-fi page
(https://ko-fi.com/thebreadcode).
The feedback from the community has been amazing and I already raised
a lot more money than
I initially expected. The first version of the book will only be available
digitally. This way everyone can read the book. There might be a hardcover
version too in the future, depending on how well this book is appreciated
by bakers around the world. The hardcover version will cost a bit of money,
while the digital version will always be completely free.
With this book I will try to be as scientific as possible, but in no way In software terms, this would be a {\it bread framework}.
claim that this is a work of science. I have conducted several experiments
myself that I will show you in this book. But to call this science, you would
probably need to repeat the same experiment a thousand times in a lab
environment. I will do my best to provide scientific references where possible
and clearly distinguish between facts and my personal opinion.
I hope you have fun reading this book and that you learn a lore more about It is my goal for this book to help everyone facing issues with flour, fermentation, baking,
the fascinating world of bread making. I sincerely wish that this work and more. It should provide a detailed understanding as to why certain steps are necessary
will provide you with a solid toolchain that I wish I had when starting and how to adapt when things go wrong while making bread.
to make bread.
It is my desire for this knowledge to be accessible to everyone around the world, regardless
of budget, and as such, do not want to charge for the book. That's why I've decided to make
it open source and have asked the community to support my work financially via my ko-fi page
(https://ko-fi.com/thebreadcode). The community's feedback has been amazing so far, and
I've already raised much more money than initially expected.
The first version of the book will only be available digitally---this way, everyone can read
it---though there might also be a hardcover version in the future, depending on how well received
and appreciated it is by bakers around the world. The hardcover version will, of course, cost a
bit of money, but the digital version will remain free.
In this book, I will try to be as scientific as possible. I in no way claim, however, that
it will itself be a work of science. I have conducted several experiments that I will write
about here, but to truly call this science, you would probably need to repeat the same experiment
a thousand times in a lab environment, which I have not done. I will do my best, however, to provide
scientific references where possible and to clearly distinguish between facts and personal opinion.
I hope you have fun reading this and that you learn more about the fascinating world of bread
making, and it is my sincere wish that this work provides you with the solid toolchain that I wish
I'd had access to when starting my own journey with bread.
Thank you. Thank you.
Hendrik Hendrik