Improve typography (#120)

* Add unbreakable space before a reference or a citation

avoids ref to be put on next line or page...

* Add unbreakable space between I and verb

* Remove spacing before footnotes

Also moved it before the final sentence dots in many cases... might need
a review of what is best.  But this is a safe default choice from an
esthetic point of view.

* Improve footnotes and punctuations

Reverse order/kerning especially with sans-serif version.

* Remove manual enumerate

* Fix wording in a citation.

Reads better that way and is shorter.

* Use emph instead of italics

1) Markup semantic not style
2) Will deal with various level of empahasis
3) Was a mix of \it and \textit

* Fix usage of quotes

Also replaced some of then by \emph as it is (IMHO) more visually
pleasant.

* Captitalize before reference

* Correct dashes length

see here:
https://www.merriam-webster.com/words-at-play/em-dash-en-dash-how-to-use

* Remove space before label and homogenize caption

Apparently it can create a wrong reference, if notthing else shuts
texcheck up and cost nothing... so let's do it.

While at it adding a dot at the end of each caption.

* Add missing empty line before signature in preface

* Add a static checker target to makefile

Shall help prevent adding mistakes in new versions
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@@ -10,9 +10,10 @@ be exactly the type of bread you should consider.
\begin{table}[!htb]
\begin{center}
\input{tables/table-overview-bread-types.tex}
\caption{An overview of different bread types and their respective complexity}
\caption{An overview of different bread types and their respective
complexity.}%
\label{tab:bread-types-comparison}
\end{center}
\label{tab:bread-types-comparison}
\end{table}
\section{Flatbread}
@@ -23,10 +24,9 @@ To make a flatbread no oven is required; all you need is a stove.
\begin{figure}[!htb]
\includegraphics[width=\textwidth]{sourdough-stove}
\caption{An einkorn flatbread made directly over fire. This
is part of a video where I was trying to reproduce sourdough
recipes of our ancestors. I called the recipe "cave bread". Some viewers
pointed out that probably not all our ancestors lived in caves.
}
is part of a video where I~was trying to reproduce sourdough
recipes of our ancestors. I~called the recipe ``cave bread''. Some viewers
pointed out that probably not all our ancestors lived in caves.}
\end{figure}
This type of bread is super simple to make as you can skip
@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ during the baking process and thus make the bread fluffier.
If your water content is very high, it will produce a
pancake-like consistency.
Refer to section \ref{section:flat-bread-recipe} "\nameref{section:flat-bread-recipe}"
Refer to Section~\ref{section:flat-bread-recipe}~``\nameref{section:flat-bread-recipe}''
to see a full recipe including the process of making such a flatbread.
\section{Loaf pan bread}
@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@ an oven.
\begin{figure}[!htb]
\includegraphics[width=\textwidth]{loaf-pan-free-standing.jpg}
\caption{A freestanding bread and a wheat loaf pan bread. Both of them
received a small incision before baking which helps to control how they open up}
received a small incision before baking which helps to control how they open up.}%
\label{fig:free-standing-loaf-pan}
\end{figure}
@@ -71,14 +71,14 @@ To make a great loaf pan bread with little work:
1. Mix the ingredients of your dough (gluten free works too)
2. Place into the loaf pan
3. Wait until your dough has roughly doubled in size
4. Bake in a non pre-heated oven for around 30-50 minutes
4. Bake in a non pre-heated oven for around 30--50 minutes
Knowing the exact baking time is sometimes a little challenging
as it might be that the outside of your bread is cooked but
the inside is still raw. The best way is to use a thermometer
and measure the core temperature. At around 92°C (197°F) your
dough is done. I generally bake loaf pan bread at around 200°C (390°F),
which is a little less than my freestanding bread which I bake
dough is done. I~generally bake loaf pan bread at around 200°C (390°F),
which is a little less than my freestanding bread which I~bake
at 230°C (445°F). That's because it takes a while for the dough
to bake properly inside the loaf pan. The edges don't heat up
as quickly. Then the top part of the dough is properly cooked, while
@@ -88,7 +88,7 @@ of your loaf pan. This way you simulate a Dutch oven. The dough's
evaporating moisture will stay inside.
A good trick to make excellent loaf pan bread is to make a very
sticky dough. You can opt for a hydration of 90-100 percent, almost
sticky dough. You can opt for a hydration of 90--100 percent, almost
resembling a default sourdough starter. Just like with flatbread,
the high humidity helps to make a more airy, fluffy crumb. At
the same time the bread will be a bit chewier. This
@@ -111,9 +111,9 @@ What's amazing about this type of bread is that it works
with every flour. The overall time to work the dough is probably
less than 5 minutes, making it very easy to integrate
into your daily routine. Furthermore, loaf pans use the space
in your oven very efficiently. Using pans I can
in your oven very efficiently. Using pans I~can
easily bake 5 loaves at the same time in my home oven.
Normally I would need multiple baking sessions for
Normally I~would need multiple baking sessions for
freestanding loaves.
\section{Free standing bread}
@@ -125,8 +125,9 @@ and tools are required.
\begin{figure}[!htb]
\includegraphics[width=1.0\textwidth]{free-standing-loaf.jpg}
\centering
\caption{A freestanding sourdough bread. Note the incision known as an "ear" and the oven spring clearly
distinguish this type of bread from flatbread and loaf pan bread}
\caption{A freestanding sourdough bread. Note the incision known as an
\emph{ear} and the oven spring clearly
distinguish this type of bread from flatbread and loaf pan bread.}
\end{figure}
Normally you mix your dough. When using wheat you make sure
@@ -150,9 +151,9 @@ But after baking you will be rewarded with a beautiful bread
with great taste and consistency.
There is a fully dedicated recipe and tutorial
for this type of bread in the "\nameref{chapter:wheat-sourdough}" chapter.
for this type of bread in the~''\nameref{chapter:wheat-sourdough}''~chapter.
\section{Simple flatbread recipe}
\section{Simple flatbread recipe}%
\label{section:flat-bread-recipe}
If you are just getting started, making a flatbread is the
@@ -163,14 +164,18 @@ any flour, including gluten-free options.
\begin{figure}[!htb]
\includegraphics{figures/fig-process-flat-bread.pdf}
\caption{The process of making a flatbread is very simple, requiring very little effort. This
type of bread is especially handy for busy bakers.}
type of bread is especially handy for busy bakers.}%
\label{fig:flat-bread-process}
\end{figure}
This is my go-to recipe that I use to make bread whenever
I have little time or when I am abroad. You can choose
between two options: 1) A flatbread similar to a roti or naan bread
or 2) sourdough pancakes.
This is my go-to recipe that I~use to make bread whenever
I~have little time or when I~am abroad. You can choose
between two options:
%
\begin{enumerate}
\item A flatbread similar to a roti or naan bread
\item sourdough pancakes.
\end{enumerate}
\begin{table}[!htb]
\begin{center}
@@ -196,17 +201,17 @@ using warm water.
\caption{A flatbread made with purely wheat flour. The dough is drier
at around 60 percent hydration. The drier dough is a little harder
to mix. As wheat contains more gluten, the dough puffs up during
the baking process}
the baking process.}
\end{figure}
This way you should have around 11 g of sourdough ready in the evening. You will have
the perfect quantity to make a dough for one person. In case you want to make more
bread, simply multiply the quantities shown in table \ref*{tab:flat-bread-ingredients}.
bread, simply multiply the quantities shown in table~\ref*{tab:flat-bread-ingredients}.
Then in the evening simply mix the ingredients as shown in the table. Your dough
is going to be ready in the morning. It's typically ready after 6-12 hours. If
is going to be ready in the morning. It's typically ready after 6--12 hours. If
you use more sourdough starter, it will be ready faster. If you use less it will take
longer. Try to aim for a fermentation time of 8-12 hours. If you use
longer. Try to aim for a fermentation time of 8--12 hours. If you use
your dough too soon, the flavor might not be as good. If you use it later
your dough might be a little more sour. The best option is to experiment
and see what you personally like the most.
@@ -220,8 +225,8 @@ it is ready.
\begin{figure}[htb!]
\includegraphics[width=1.0\textwidth]{ethiopian-woman-checking-bread}
\centering
\caption{An Ethiopian woman baking an "injera" made using teff flour.
The image has been provided by Charliefleurene via Wikipedia}
\caption{An Ethiopian woman baking an \emph{injera} made using teff flour.
The image has been provided by Charliefleurene via Wikipedia.}
\end{figure}
If you used the flatbread option with less water, look at the size increase
@@ -240,13 +245,13 @@ process\footnote{There are some exceptions. In some rare cases your starter
might also work at lower temperatures. You might have cultivated microbes that work best at
low temperatures. Nevertheless, fermentation
is always slower the colder it gets. A fridge really helps to preserve the state
of your dough.}
of your dough.}.
and your dough will last for several days. The longer you wait, the more sour the
bread is going to be. The fridge is a great option in case you want to
take the dough with you when visiting friends. People are going
to love you for the freshly baked flatbreads or pancakes. If you dare,
you can also taste a little bit of your raw uncooked dough. It is likely
going to taste relatively sour. I do this frequently to better evaluate the
going to taste relatively sour. I~do this frequently to better evaluate the
state of my doughs.
@@ -255,14 +260,14 @@ state of my doughs.
\centering
\caption{A sourdough pancake made with teff flour. The pockets come from
evaporated water and \ch{CO2} created by the microbes.
The image has been provided by Lukasz Nowak via Wikipedia}
The image has been provided by Lukasz Nowak via Wikipedia.}
\end{figure}
If you are feeling lazy or don't have time, you could also use older sourdough starter
to make the dough directly without any prior starter feedings. Your sourdough starter
is going to regrow inside your dough. The
final bread might be a bit more on the sour side as the balance of yeast to
bacteria could be off. In the table I recommended using around 5 to 20 percent
bacteria could be off. In the table I~recommended using around 5 to 20 percent
of sourdough starter based on the flour to make the dough. If you were to follow
this approach, just use around 1 percent and make the dough directly.
The dough is probably going to be ready 24 hours later, depending on the temperature.
@@ -283,7 +288,7 @@ dough to come to room temperature. If you have a lid,
place it on your pan. The lid helps to cook your dough from the top.
The evaporating water will circulate and heat up the dough's surface. When
making a flatbread, make the dough around 1 cm thick. When using the pancake
option, opt for around 0.1-0.5 cm depending on what you like.
option, opt for around 0.1--0.5 cm depending on what you like.
\begin{figure}[htb!]
\includegraphics[width=1.0\textwidth]{einkorn-crumb.jpg}
@@ -294,14 +299,14 @@ option, opt for around 0.1-0.5 cm depending on what you like.
more wheat to the mix of your dough.}
\end{figure}
After 2-4 minutes flip over the pancake or flatbread. Bake it for the same
After 2--4 minutes flip over the pancake or flatbread. Bake it for the same
time from the other side. Depending on what you like, you can wait a little
longer to allow the bread to become a bit charred. The longer you
bake your bread, the more of the acidity is going to evaporate. If your
dough is a bit more on the sour side, you can use this trick to balance
out the acidity. This really depends on which flavor you are looking for.
When making a flatbread I recommend wrapping the baked flatbreads
When making a flatbread I~recommend wrapping the baked flatbreads
in a kitchen towel. This way more of the evaporating humidity
stays inside of your bread. This makes sure your flatbreads stay
nice and fluffy for a longer period after the bake. A similar strategy is
@@ -314,5 +319,5 @@ they do not dry out.
Keep a little bit of your unbaked dough. You can use it to make the next
batch of bread or pancakes for the next day. If you want to bake a few days later, add
a little bit of water and flour and store this mixture in your fridge
for as long as you like.\footnote{The starter will stay good for months. If you expect to
leave it longer, consider drying a little bit of your sourdough starter.}
for as long as you like\footnote{The starter will stay good for months. If you expect to
leave it longer, consider drying a little bit of your sourdough starter.}.