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@@ -2,11 +2,11 @@ Sourdough has been made since ancient times. The exact origins of fermented
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bread are, however, unknown. One of the most ancient preserved
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sourdough breads has been excavated in Switzerland.
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However, based on recent research, some scientists speculate that sourdough
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bread had already been made in 12000 BC in ancient Jordan \cite{jordan+bread}.
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bread had already been made in 12000 BC in ancient Jordan~\cite{jordan+bread}.
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\begin{figure}[h]
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\includegraphics[width=\textwidth]{einkorn-crumb}
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\caption{An ancient Einkorn flatbread. Note the dense crumb structure.}
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\caption{An ancient Einkorn flatbread. Note the dense crumb structure.}%
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\label{einkorn-crumb}
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\end{figure}
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@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ By feeding your sourdough starter, you are selectively breeding
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microorganisms that are good at eating your flour. With
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each iteration, your sourdough knows how to better ferment the flour
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at hand. This is also the reason why more mature sourdough starters sometimes
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tend to leaven doughs faster \cite{review+of+sourdough+starters}. It is crazy if you
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tend to leaven doughs faster~\cite{review+of+sourdough+starters}. It is crazy if you
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think about it. People have been using this process despite not
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knowing what was actually going on for thousands of years! The
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sourdough in itself is a symbiotic relationship. But the sourdough
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@@ -58,15 +58,15 @@ of the beer fermentation to start making doughs. They would notice
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that the resulting bread doughs were becoming fluffy and compared
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to the sourdough process would lack the acidity in the final product.
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A popular example is shown in a report from 1875. Eben Norton Horsford
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wrote about the famous "Kaiser Semmeln" (Emperor's bread rolls).
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wrote about the famous \emph{Kaiser Semmeln} (Emperor's bread rolls).
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These are essentially bread rolls made with brewer's yeast instead
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of the sourdough leavening agent. As the process is more expensive,
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bread rolls like these were ultimately consumed by the noble people
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in Vienna \cite{vienna+breadrolls}.
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in Vienna~\cite{vienna+breadrolls}.
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\begin{figure}[h]
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\includegraphics[width=\textwidth]{sourdough-stove}
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\caption{A bread made over the stove without an oven}
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\caption{A bread made over the stove without an oven.}%
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\label{sourdough-stove}
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\end{figure}
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@@ -74,13 +74,13 @@ Only in 1857, the French microbiologist Louis Pasteur discovered
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the process of alcoholic fermentation. He would prove that
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yeast microorganisms are the reason for alcoholic fermentation
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and not other chemical catalysts. What would then start is
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what I describe as the 150 lost years of bread making. In 1879
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what I~describe as the 150 lost years of bread making. In 1879
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the first machines and centrifuges were developed to centrifuge
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pure yeast. This yeast would be extracted from batches of sourdough.
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The pure yeast would prove to be excellent and turbocharged
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at leavening bread doughs. What would previously take 10 hours
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to leaven a bread dough could now be done within 1 hour.
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The process became much more efficient. During World War II
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The process became much more efficient. During World~War~II
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the first packaged dry yeast was developed. This would ultimately
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allow bakeries and home bakers to make bread much faster.
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Thanks to pure yeast, building bread making machines was
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@@ -96,7 +96,7 @@ vanished from the surface of the Earth. Only a handful
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of true nerds would continue making bread with sourdough.
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Suddenly people started to talk more often about celiac disease
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and the role of gluten. The disease isn't new; it has first
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been described in 250 AD \cite{coeliac+disease}. People
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been described in 250 AD~\cite{coeliac+disease}. People
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would note how modern bread has much more gluten compared
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to ancient bread. The bread in ancient times probably was much flatter.
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The grains over time have been bred more and more towards containing a higher
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@@ -130,7 +130,7 @@ Part of their diet is to consume the proteins in the dough.
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Modern bread is faster and no longer has lactic acid bacteria.
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Both factors together mean that you are consuming products
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with a much higher gluten value compared to ancient times
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when natural fermentation was used \cite{raffaella+di+cagno}.
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when natural fermentation was used~\cite{raffaella+di+cagno}.
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During the California Gold Rush, French bakers brought the sourdough
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culture to Northern America. A popular bread became the
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@@ -152,7 +152,7 @@ dough mess. This complexity led to many bakers looking
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for help and many thriving communities formed around
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the topic of homemade bread.
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When interviewing Karl de Smedt (owner of the Sourdough
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When interviewing Karl de~Smedt (owner of the Sourdough
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Library) he said something that changed my way of thinking
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about bread: "The future of
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modern bread is in the past \cite{interview+karl+de+smedt}."
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about bread: ``The future of
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modern read is in the past~\cite{interview+karl+de+smedt}.''
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