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19 Commits

Author SHA1 Message Date
Bastian Hodapp
2daba55c3e fix: typo in preface (#384) 2024-12-06 16:02:09 +01:00
Hendrik Kleinwaechter
5eea8b8bf8 Text improvements
Adds some text improvements from the book review.
2024-01-10 14:04:59 +01:00
cedounet
c563477773 Restructure preface into logical paragraphs (#192)
Plus some very small changes in the text
2023-08-24 09:43:15 +02:00
cedounet
261d1fb6de Remove first-line indentation (#170)
Make pragraph indentation as per Hendrik's liking.
2023-08-15 18:41:07 +02:00
cedounet
7cc71dc6ac Small fixes (#155)
* Fix various typos and references or links

- Misuse of product macro the x sign did not appear
- Use macro for milligrams
- Some refes were without hyperlink for some reason ?
- confusion between section and subsections
- a little grammar.. exact value not absolute, don't think a negative
  amount of flower was ever an option :D

* Use siunitx for temperature everywhere

Apparently some files escaped my script last time, or messed up in git
merge... Anyway fixed now and should be more consistent.

* Simplify Fermentolysis table

I woudl hope this is more clear with less lines.

* Remove double bottomrule

* Fix grammar

* Use correct font familly in preface

Small corrections on font familly and extra space for signature.
TODO: I did not change the paragraph breaking but we might want to
revisit it later.

* Fix wrong percentage range

fixes https://github.com/hendricius/the-sourdough-framework/issues/156
2023-07-21 11:46:33 +02:00
cedounet
4637c29a37 Use Siunitx package for dealing with units (#129)
It is complicated :
[1] The International System of Units (si), https://www.bipm.org/en/
measurement-units/.
[2] International System of Units from nist, http://physics.nist.gov/cuu/Units/
index.html.

And one will never get it right (space or not, half-space?) nor
consistent so using that instead.

I am not sure how times and hours, when to write digits and when in
letter so I did not change much..

Did not touch the tables as ebooks on github actions seems to break when
you look at them funny.

Co-authored-by: Cedric <ced@awase.ostal>
2023-06-28 20:30:12 +02:00
cedounet
ca43ef0bd9 Improve typography (#120)
* Add unbreakable space before a reference or a citation

avoids ref to be put on next line or page...

* Add unbreakable space between I and verb

* Remove spacing before footnotes

Also moved it before the final sentence dots in many cases... might need
a review of what is best.  But this is a safe default choice from an
esthetic point of view.

* Improve footnotes and punctuations

Reverse order/kerning especially with sans-serif version.

* Remove manual enumerate

* Fix wording in a citation.

Reads better that way and is shorter.

* Use emph instead of italics

1) Markup semantic not style
2) Will deal with various level of empahasis
3) Was a mix of \it and \textit

* Fix usage of quotes

Also replaced some of then by \emph as it is (IMHO) more visually
pleasant.

* Captitalize before reference

* Correct dashes length

see here:
https://www.merriam-webster.com/words-at-play/em-dash-en-dash-how-to-use

* Remove space before label and homogenize caption

Apparently it can create a wrong reference, if notthing else shuts
texcheck up and cost nothing... so let's do it.

While at it adding a dot at the end of each caption.

* Add missing empty line before signature in preface

* Add a static checker target to makefile

Shall help prevent adding mistakes in new versions
2023-06-12 09:12:22 +02:00
Hendrik Kleinwaechter
0ce7960b7a Hardcover version of book (#109)
This adds information on the upcoming hardcover version of the book.
2023-06-01 16:22:36 +02:00
Niklas Baumgart
a7a069a688 Fixed duplicate word and spaces (#86)
* Fixed duplicate spaces

* fixed duplicate there
2023-05-19 10:48:40 +02:00
julianscodeword
510da641ab Grammatical corrections as per google drive. (#76) 2023-05-02 17:04:26 +02:00
hanclintonnyx
725ab3df46 Minor punctuation and grammatical fixes to Preface and History. (#61)
* Minor punctuation and grammatical fixes to Preface and History.

* Spelling, wording, and punctuation fixes

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Co-authored-by: Clint Herron <hanclinto@gmail.com>
Co-authored-by: Hendrik Kleinwaechter <hendrik.kleinwaechter@gmail.com>
2023-03-24 10:38:06 +01:00
Hendrik Kleinwaechter
67d701c422 Add Feedback KeroseneLady
Thank you!
2023-03-17 16:11:23 +01:00
Hendrik Kleinwaechter
620ac93d21 Grammar improvements. Thanks AC 2023-03-17 15:56:38 +01:00
Jan Walz
8bc3596de2 Fix typo in preface (#33) 2023-01-06 13:07:54 +01:00
Hendrik Kleinwaechter
c27ebe45c0 Wheat Sourdough - dough strength (#29)
* tmp commit

* Spelling mistakes fix

* Fix display

* Improve text

* Add kneading flowchart

* Improve sentence. Thanks Any_Key

* Improve chart based on feedback, add references

* Cleanup + add references

* use tikzpicture for charts

* Replace image with chart

* Add image and table

* Add dough development charts

* Update readme
2022-12-28 11:55:33 +01:00
Hendrik Kleinwaechter
ef939f8fad Spelling suggestions by Andrew Stirling
Andrew suggested some improvements via email. Thank you!
2022-08-26 18:02:03 +02:00
James
ad9d1ceb22 Grammar and style edits to the preface (#9)
* Update preface.tex

Some grammar fixes, capitalization of proper nouns (days of the week like Saturday), and some modest language changes to make the text flow a little better.

* Update preface.tex

Fix double quotes

* Update preface.tex

Fix double quotes (again)

* Update preface.tex

One last double quotes fix

* completed grammar and style edits for the preface

* small fixes

* final polish
2022-06-23 19:07:14 +02:00
Hendrik Kleinwaechter
1b31347e52 Preface (#2)
* Update acknowledgements

* update foreword

* Preface

This adds the preface chapter.

* Clean up
2022-04-14 14:07:44 +02:00
Hendrik Kleinwaechter
e633f7dea5 Add supporters to book 2022-03-20 12:01:40 +01:00