Incorporate feedback for Evan mill machine text

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@@ -185,12 +185,11 @@ of the sourdough leavening agent. As the process is more expensive,
bread rolls like these were ultimately consumed by the noble people
in Vienna~\cite{vienna+breadrolls}.
As industrialization began inventors like Oliver Evans, in \num{1785}
developed improved mill devices~\cite{evans+mill} incorporating several
innovations, including automated machinery for various milling processes.
This eventually evolved to steam-powered grain mills, more efficient than
traditional water or animal-powered mills. Those steam-powered mill marked a
significant advancement in industrial technology for bread making.
Industrialization of the grist milling process, starting in the late
18\textsuperscript{th}~century with Oliver Evans (\num{1785}) and his mill
designs for continuous hands-off flour production~\cite{evans+mill}, and
evolving to steam-powered mills, made possible significant advancements in
bread production.
\begin{figure}[ht]
\includegraphics[width=\textwidth]{sourdough-stove}